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Swimming in the Sea

Patricia Finney
2 min readApr 28, 2023

72. 30 August 2021

My photo. Falmouth Bay

I’m swimming in the sea in the dawn,

The water salty and smoothly rippled;

I’m astonished that I’ve learned not to fear cold water:

Thirty seconds of “Aargh, get me outa here!”

Followed by a buzz that makes me smile,

The warmth flowing from my heart

As the cold-shock proteins do their job.

*

I’m a very slow swimmer, terribly bad at it.

My daughter is like a selkie when she swims.

I expect to see a seal-pelt left behind when she emerges.

I don’t even do English Windmill stroke, more Shortened Breast,

But who cares, no one is here because it’s early

On a Bank Holiday and everyone’s asleep.

*

I’m swimming in the sea as the red sun

Rolls his head behind the pillow of the hill

And looks at me, saying “Urgh.”

He’s a bit hungover. I smile and slowly paddle

Back to the steps. He’s sitting on the side

Of the land now, bracing himself.

*

I come up the steps like an even sturdier Aphrodite.

I dry myself on a towel, get dressed.

I’m not worried about being seen as she was.

My age wraps me up like a seal-pelt.

I can do whatever I like.

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Coffee please?

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Patricia Finney
Patricia Finney

Written by Patricia Finney

I've been a published author since the age of 18, back when dinosaurs roamed. I write books, poems (patriciafinney2.substack.com) and anything else I feel like.

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